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Noob mistake in writing

Tuesday, April 27th, 2010

Okay, I just made a newbie mistake in writing something, and all I can say is it is because it is almost five in the morning and I have been up all night.

So, what did I do? In writing first person narrative I was so fussy in making sure I stayed in first person (which I HATE to write) that I missed a small action that was GLARING as soon as I hit send and could no longer fix it.

The problem… well… I was adding to a write along story over at Writing.com and added a sequence where a character is reacting to another one and I typed…

(drumroll please)

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“I know it sounds dumb, Jake,” Max’s eyes roll toward the ceiling, “but you’re two inches tall. How do you explain it?”
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Yes, that character’s eyes just popped out of his head and rolled through the air toward the ceiling. Or at least that is how it reads. ::pounding head on desk:: Why, oh why, do I only see things like that when I can no longer fix the error of my tiredness?

I think I best go sleep now. You can read the whole scene I wrote, or better yet, read and add to the entire interactive story at Writing.com yourself.

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How long should an online article be?

Thursday, March 18th, 2010

We live in a age where everyone wants instant gratification. If you can not provide a reason to read on in the first few paragraphs, then chances are your reader will loose interest and move on to something that is more interesting to them.

The Internet is a huge place, with uncounted writing opportunities, so it is only natural to wonder just what the ideal length of an online article is. As a general rule online articles should be kept to an average length of 300 to 500 words, with some leeway for shorter or longer works depending on the topic.

Why 300 to 500 words? Quite simply because it is long enough to actually say something about the subject you are writing about, and brief enough that your reader can read it in just a few minutes. This is by no means a hard and fast rule, since online discussions have proven that even those who are writing articles for websites have a difference of opinion on how long an article should be. 250 to 11,000 words, less, more… It all focuses around one general rule. Write how much you need to write to inform the reader, no more.

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Don’t Stereotype Your Characters

Thursday, February 18th, 2010

When you are writing a story, you want to create unique characters for it, not cookie cutter stereotyped characters.

Don’t create a dark shadowy figure that lurks in the shadows of an alley. Create a real character that watches your hero from the gloomy depths of the alleyway.

Rather than a busty blond or nondescript brunette taking your hero’s order in the cafe, maybe their order is taken by a young man that has traces of grease under his fingernails from his second job as a mechanic.

A danger zone is in too much detail, however, which can be just as bad as a character that is too classic a stereotype. Yes it might be stereotyping to have a meek bespeckled librarian, but just as dangerous is to toss out all of the traits of your stereotypical librarian. There should be aspects of the character that, while not what one might expect from the role, are also universally expected.

For example, a librarian might be different in their body builder physique, but they likely still love books or they would not have become a librarian.

A good exercise is to take a sheet of paper and write the kind of character you are creating at the top. Then draw a line down the middle. On the left write everything you think of when you think of that particular type of person, including and especially stereotypes for them. Then on the right side of the paper write all of the things you need for the character in your story. From these two lists you can create a character that has the traits of both what you need and what you expect, and from that you can create a non-stereotypical character or your story.

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